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One More Thing About Oprah’s Speech…..

Sorry, I just couldn’t resist adding a couple hundred more words to the millions that already have been written about that speech.

I won’t add to the chorus of voices pointing out Oprah is a great presenter who spoke at a turning point in history. Instead, what knocked me out as a speechwriter was the script. In only a thousand words or so, the speech demonstrated the power of a whole bunch of the most important “Principles of Great Speechwriting.”

I’ve tweeted about several of them, but here I want to focus on one of my favorite speechwriting tips: “Start Strong or Die.”

Clearly, Oprah knows that—and how.

The Golden Globes speech began with a three word “thank you.” And then…

In 1964, I was a little girl sitting on the linoleum floor of my mother’s house in Milwaukee, watching Anne Bancroft present the Oscar for best actor at the 36th Academy Awards. She opened the envelope and said five words that literally made history: “The winner is Sidney Poitier.” Up to the stage came the most elegant man I had ever seen. I remember his tie was white and, of course, his skin was black. And I’d never seen a black man being celebrated like that.

Wow.

A personal memory, a great story with wonderful details (“his tie was white and…his skin was black.”) And a terrific introduction to the rousing themes of the speech.

So,  the next time you prepare to give a speech–or write one—take one more look at what Oprah said.